Here is a simple way to find out. Ask someone who has read your draft script the following 9 questions:
1.) Who is the main character?
2.) What is the main character’s goal in the story?
3.) What are the main character’s physical and psychological characteristics?
4.) What makes him/her unique?
5.) When does the story take place? Define the era and the year. Describe any events from that time period that cause conflict for the main character.
6.) Where does the main character live during the story? Describe the geographic location. What role does the location play in the main conflict of the story?
7.) Why do the actions of the main character determine whether he/she achieves the goal and overcomes obstacles?
8.) How do his/her unique character traits influence their actions?
9.) How does he/she use his unique characteristics to overcome obstacles & achieve the goal?
If your reader can answer the above questions... you've done a great job!
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Brian K. Allen
Screenplay Writer & Coach
http://www.Scripts4Agents.com
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